tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4630063725012586262.post568733184581083793..comments2023-03-24T04:06:16.991-04:00Comments on Running with Paintbrushes: Becca's Shadow sketcnRunning with Paintbrusheshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17590422278727336196noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4630063725012586262.post-47737302025038111472011-03-22T11:54:42.511-04:002011-03-22T11:54:42.511-04:00Thanks for the feedback Lis! I did make some chang...Thanks for the feedback Lis! I did make some changes to the bottom panel, but got started on the painting before you commented (it's due tomorrow) so couldn't work in your suggestions :( I think I did make it better, though.<br /><br />Even MORE technology woes came along after I posted - the new RAM that I got for my laptop (so that I can run photoshop) didn't work, AND our internet router mysteriously stopped working. WHAT IS GOING ON?! <br /><br />I may take you up on the scanner offer :)R Solowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01578895072074865656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4630063725012586262.post-14860978297267570992011-03-21T10:17:41.398-04:002011-03-21T10:17:41.398-04:00Maybe for the last panel you could have the mouse ...Maybe for the last panel you could have the mouse jumping into the panel... so it would be coming into the page from the left... and the shadow would be in front of it (like seeing the shadow in front of you as you jump into your bed), and the farm could be in the background on the top right. might be a better composition!<br /><br />Also, are you sure you want the top two panels touching? What if you saw a bit of grass in between those as well?<br /><br />Sorry about your technology woes! You can use my scanner temporarily... you'd have to come over though!<br /><br />Anyway, this should be really cute (:Elisabeth Albahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11594760257037917951noreply@blogger.com