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We are five illustrators on a mission to create lots of good art, and to invite lots of feedback, so that we can create even better art! We will regularly post assignments, then post our progress and critique each other - and you can critique us too! We love feedback! Our names are Scott Murphy, Owen Weber, Rebecca Solow, Elisabeth Alba, and Craig Maher.
I love the movement in this piece, I can't wait to see the final. Are you gonna keep it in a more raw or burnt umber tone, cause that would look great. I feel like the left side of the piece is missing something. It seems like all the focus is on the right side, maybe if you put a head of a sunflower, all wilted up, on the bottom right it might fix that, like really up close and keep it real dark.
ReplyDeleteLooks great! I like what you did with her outfit. I think that the fabric of her skirt could swoop a bit more...the upper bit is parallel to the page, so maybe create a more dramatic dip in the fabric? The rest looks awesome. Just keep the landscape around her really dark and dramatic, and this'll be killer!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! I do plan on keeping it very dark and dull with browns and greyish greens. I see what you mean about the left side...A big dark dead flower may help!
ReplyDeleteGood call on the fabric Becca! I will fix that!
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