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We are five illustrators on a mission to create lots of good art, and to invite lots of feedback, so that we can create even better art! We will regularly post assignments, then post our progress and critique each other - and you can critique us too! We love feedback! Our names are Scott Murphy, Owen Weber, Rebecca Solow, Elisabeth Alba, and Craig Maher.
So far I like it, just the skulls seem to hang from a branch too far away...
ReplyDeleteHey Scott, lookin good! My one concern is the areas of empty space around her arm, in the center of the composition. Maybe bring that upper vulture's head down, and have some wing feathers from the lower vulture sticking up, to break up that space just a bit more. Other than that, this looks very cool!
ReplyDeleteYeah I would change the upper birds wing so maybe it's behind his head. It would make the birds head pop and break up that space. Cause right now that wing is also creating a tangent with the top of the skull.
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